April 28, 2015

Monsoon – Uttarmegh – 7

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This illustration by artist Nana Joshi  is based on the 25th verse of the Uttarmegh. (In the illustration, Nana Joshi mentions that this is based on the 23rd verse of Uttarmegh. This is because his illustrations were based on the Marathi translation of Meghadūta by Kusumagraj, in which the numbering is somewhat different.) In this verse, the Yaksha speculates that the cloud may see his wife worshipping to seek relief from their separation, or she may be drawing his portrait from memory and fancy, or perhaps asking their caged sarika bird whether she misses him too.

संस्कृत (कालिदास, मेघदूत, खण्ड २, २३)
आलोके ते निपतति पुरा सा बलिव्याकुला वा मत्सादृश्यं विरहतनु वा भावगम्यं लिखन्ती ।
पृच्छन्ती वा मधुरवचनां शारिकां पञ्जरस्थां कच्चित् भर्तु: स्मरसि रसिके त्वं हि तस्य प्रियेति ॥२५॥

English 1 (by Arun Nisargand)
When you see her she may be lost in my thoughts or may be asking the sarika in the cage: Do you miss him too? You were his favorite!

English 2 (annotated by McComas and prepared and presented by Aditya Sachan)
She will come at once into your sight, either engaged in pouring oblations,
or drawing from memory my portrait, but grown thin on account of separation,
or asking the sweet-voiced sarika bird in its cage,
‘I hope you remember the master, O elegant one, for you are his favourite; (25)

English 3 (by Mubin M.)
Thou first wilt see her when she seeks relief
In worship; or, half fancying, half recalling,
She draws mine image worn by absent grief;
Or asks the caged, sweetly-singing starling:
“Do you remember, dear, our lord? You were his darling.”

मराठी १ (कुसुमाग्रज, मेघदूत, अवृत्ती पहिली, पॉप्युलर बुक डेपो, १९५६)
दिसेल अथवा पूजन करितां भाविकतेने सती,
चितारीत वा कल्पनेतली कृष माझी आकृती,
उभी पिंजऱ्यासमोर अथवा पुसत सारिकेप्रत :
तूंहि लाडकी होतिस त्यांची, तुज होते का स्मृत ॥उत्तरमेघ २३॥

मराठी २ (डॉ. वसंत पटवर्धन, मेघदूत, अवृत्ती तिसरी, सन् पब्लिकेश्न्स, २००४)
पूजा करिता देवांची तुज दिसेल मम कांता
विरहे सुकल्या कल्पुनि मजला चित्री रेखाटिता
पिंजर्‍यातल्या मधुर-बोलत्या पुसेल मैनेला
आठवती का नाथ तुला गे तू त्यांची प्रेमला ॥८७॥

हिन्दी १ (रवीन्द्र कुमार दास, मेघदूत अनुवाद कविता से)
सुनो मेघ
वह लगी हुई होगी पूजा में होकर जो कृशकाय विरह से
या खोई अपने भावों में हो मेरी तस्वीर बनाती
या बतियाती हो मैना से पिंजरबद्ध होकर भी मैना
मीठी बातें ही करती है ‘री मैना ! ओ री मनमौजी !
तू तो बड़ी दुलारी थी री उनकी याद सताती है क्या !’
ऐसा ही कुछ करती हो दिख जाएंगी वो …

हिन्दी २ (कविता कोश से)
हे मेघ, वह मेरी पत्‍नी या तो देवताओं की पूजा में लगी हुई दिखाई पड़ेगी, या विरह में क्षीण मेरी आकृति का अपने मनोभावों के अनुसार चित्र लिखती होगी, या पिंजड़े की मैना से मीठे स्‍वर में पूछती होगी – ‘ओ रसिया, तुझे भी क्‍या वे स्‍वामी याद आते हैं? तू तो उनकी दुलारी थी।’

(many thanks Nana Joshi)

April 28, 2015

Monsoon – Mausam Vigyani ka Prem Geet – 6

Mausam Vigyani ka Prem Geet

Socha tha ek din baadal ban ur jaoonga,
dharti par uske chehre ki jhalak dekh paoonga,
khili dhoop mein uski mukurahtein dekh paoonga.
Yaa phir main baarish ki nanhi boond ban jaoonga,
Aur uske phool se gaal par gir jaoonga,

Ek lamhe ke liye hi sahi, par usey choom to paoonga.
Yaa phir main baarish ki phuhaar ban jaoonga,
Aur thodi der uske hoton par thehar jaoonga,
Phir usse lipat kar gudgudate huye beh jaoonga.

Yaa phir main bhaari barsaat ban jaoonga,
Aur apna sara pyar us par barsaoonga,
Aur khud hi usko pura ka pura bhigo jaoonga.
Socha tha ek din hawa ka jhonka ban jaoonga,
Aur phir dheere dheere usey sataoonga,
Apne pyar ki meethi batein uske kaan mein phusphsaoonga.

Socha tha main ek bhyankar toofan ban jaoonga,
Aur isi josh mein usey udaa le jaoonga,
Apne aagosh mein bhar ke usey, hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaoonga.
Par aphsos! Yeh mahaz mere khyal hi nikley,
Main aaj bhi dharti par khada aasmaan ko dekhta rehta hoon.

Main uske chehre ki jhalak baadalon mein talashta rehta hoon,
Main dhoop mein uski ek udati huyee muskaan dhoondhta rehta hoon.
Main baarish ki boond ka muntzir hoon, ki woh uska chumban ban ke aa jaye,
Main bearish ki phuhaar ke intzaar mein hoon, ki woh uska sparsh ban ke aa jaye.
Main moosladhar barsaat mein uske pyar ko khojta rehta hoon,

uski dabi awaaz ki talash mein main hawaaon ko sunta rehta hoon.
Main intzaar mein hoon ki toofan is kadar aur barh jaye,
Ki mujhe is dharti se udaa kar,
Hamesha ke liye uske aagosh mein le jaye

( many thanks Mangu, too good  !)

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and here’s the english version ……

A Meteorologist’s Love Song

I thought I would be a cloud one day,
And look to the earth for a glimpse of her face,
And spot her smile in the sunshine around.
Or I would be just a little raindrop,
And fall on her cheek,
And kiss her if only for a moment.
Or I would come down as a drizzle,
And linger on her lips,
And trickle all the way down caressing her.

Or I would burst into a downpour,
And shower her with my love,
And drench her in my care.

I thought I would be a breeze one day,
And tease her gently,
And whisper my thoughts into her ears.
I thought I would be a mighty storm,
And sweep her off her feet,
And hold her close to me, forever.

But alas! these were just thoughts,
I am still on the earth and watch the skies.
I look to the cloud for a glimpse of her face,
I search the sunshine for her fleeting smile.
I wait for the raindrop to give me her kiss,

I long for the drizzle to bring me her touch.
I seek her love in the torrents of rain,
I listen to the breeze for her whispered voice.
I await that storm to gather strength,
And lift me off this earth,
And take me to her, for eternity.

(Thanks Prof K
Prof K is  Dr R. R. Kelkar, former Director General of the India Meteorological Department, New Delhi (1998-2003).
After his retirement from IMD, he had served as ISRO Chair Professor at the Department of Atmospheric and Space Sciences of the University of Pune (2004-2008).
)

Wonder, silence, gratitude

one who is going upstream ......

SS24 - in search of the bull !

one who is going upstream ......

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